This is the second chapter of a story i did for a member of the site. i would like feedback on writing style or places im going wrong.
This story is in the non-consent catagory
the link is http://www.literotica.com/stories/sh...=422578&a...
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i just posted a new story. it was written for a particular member and i would like some feedback.
the story can be found here
http://www.literotica.com/stories/sh....php?id=445038 [http://www.literotica.com/stories/showstory.php?id=445038...
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